Poem mimicking T.S. Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock”

Hi everyone, 

So this piece is something that I wrote in high school, and I recently found it hidden away in the corner of my computer. I’m posting it simply because I am curious to see what people think of it. It is childish? Probably. A little over the top? Certainly, but since a younger me penned it I’m not sure that comes as much of a surprise. 

Anyhow, just let me know what you think. Good or bad comments are both accepted. Plus, I never said that I was gifted with poetry.

Happy Reading!

Read it here

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